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Current Residence: Tartarus
Favourite genre of music: Your screams
Skin of choice: The pelts of idiot writers I have skinned
Personal Quote: "Science fiction does not necessarily mean LOGIC FAIL."
Favourite genre of music: Your screams
Skin of choice: The pelts of idiot writers I have skinned
Personal Quote: "Science fiction does not necessarily mean LOGIC FAIL."
Favourite Writers
Ones that make sense
Favourite Games
Curbstomping bad writers
Favourite Gaming Platform
Your face
Tools of the Trade
Napalm, matches, time, my zombie army
Other Interests
Grammar-nazism, coherent stories, critiques, not abusing the English language, established setting
Writer Beware! Honest Critiques Here.
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Mordax and Nocere, collectively known as Hauos (https://www.deviantart.com/hauos), are offering honest critiques to those writers that can stomach them from us. Whether you have a subscription or not, we want to hear from writers who haven’t received any feedback. We’re looking for those starved for a critique, but are able to handle the honesty we serve.
Be it Poetry or Prose, we accept any.
The criterion we grade on can seen here:
|:bulletblue:|Poetry Critique Guidelines |:bulletblack:| Prose Critique Guidelines |:bulletblue:|
If this sounds appealing to you, if you want to subject yourself to our express nitpicking, then please, send us a note and we
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Who and Why
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Introducing…
This account was created to give two critics a voice without having to worry about petty things such as decency, white lies, and other social stigmas that prevent us from saying what really needs said. The point is not to abuse, or otherwise verbally insult writers, but to be dead honest in opinions, thoughts, and comments.
It won’t always be pretty. But our ultimate goal is to help writers improve.
This joint account will be manned and maintained by Nocere and Mordax. No, not those here on DA. Those are simply the names we picked for an alias.
Requests?
If there are those of you brave enough to request a critique
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Hello, well I started a prose piece and its slightly difficult for me as I am usually a poetry writer. I would appreciate extremely if you could critique the piece I did(of prose) and maybe one of poetry.
It'd help me so much in both. Thanks!
It'd help me so much in both. Thanks!
Are you still active? I hope so!
Hello 
I don't write myself, but I'm a big supporter of what you're doing.
So, if any point, you need anything, I'd be glad to help or see if I know anyone who can do so.
Thumbs up!
I don't write myself, but I'm a big supporter of what you're doing.
So, if any point, you need anything, I'd be glad to help or see if I know anyone who can do so.
Thumbs up!
Thus far, we don't believe there is anything we require. However, if you wish to recommend our services to others, we would greatly appreciate it.
I'd like you to be a regular critic on my work-I hope that would be okay . And maybe some day (and I hope for this day to come badly) when I'd have my works published-I'd thank you for making me reach there.
You people really are the kind of critics that writers dream about. <3
. And maybe some day (and I hope for this day to come badly) when I'd have my works published-I'd thank you for making me reach there. You people really are the kind of critics that writers dream about. <3
It is a very sweet gesture, and we appreciate the sentiment. But we want to help all the little know writers out there that need betterment. My suggestion is that you branch out to your fellow writers here on DA. You are not the only one who wants regular feedback. Help out the other writers, and you'd be amazed at what you, yourself, will learn.