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Favourite genre of music: Your screams
Skin of choice: The pelts of idiot writers I have skinned
Personal Quote: "Science fiction does not necessarily mean LOGIC FAIL."
Mordax and Nocere, collectively known as Hauos,  are offering honest critiques to those writers that can stomach them from us. Whether you have a subscription or not, we want to hear from writers who haven’t received any feedback. We’re looking for those starved for a critique, but are able to handle the honesty we serve.

Be it Poetry or Prose, we accept any.

The criterion we grade on can seen here:

|:bulletblue:|Poetry Critique Guidelines |:bulletblack:| Prose Critique Guidelines |:bulletblue:|

If this sounds appealing to you, if you want to subject yourself to our express nitpicking, then please, send us a note and we’ll get to it. Within, just include a link to the piece you want us to critique. We will submit the critique as a comment (regardless of subscription or not) and then upload as a deviation to our account for archiving purposes.

We will not be critiquing whole series of works, nor are we currently accepting more than one submission per deviant. We want to get out and help the little known writer on DA.

Remember, this is for any writer that wants extensive feedback.

DISCLAIMER: Anything quoted in our critique is quoted under “fair use”, with no intention to claim the work as our own. We see honesty as essential in critiques, and are interested only in helping writers improve. If anything seems too blunt, we apologize; we have no wish to seem mean.

“Technique is really personality. That is the reason why the artist cannot teach it, why the pupil cannot learn it, and why the aesthetic critic can understand it. To the great poet, there is only one method of music -- his own. To the great painter, there is only one manner of painting -- that which he himself employs. The aesthetic critic, and the aesthetic critic alone, can appreciate all forms and all modes. It is to him that Art makes her appeal.” ~Oscar Wilde

Mordax and Nocere aka Hauos

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kaygurl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009
Hello, well I started a prose piece and its slightly difficult for me as I am usually a poetry writer. I would appreciate extremely if you could critique the piece I did(of prose) and maybe one of poetry.
It'd help me so much in both. Thanks!
PaperDart Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2009   Writer
Are you still active? I hope so!
rlkirkland Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
MimozaBlooming Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello :)
I don't write myself, but I'm a big supporter of what you're doing.

So, if any point, you need anything, I'd be glad to help or see if I know anyone who can do so.

Thumbs up!
Hauos Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
Thus far, we don't believe there is anything we require. However, if you wish to recommend our services to others, we would greatly appreciate it.
LoveHealsYou725 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
I'd like you to be a regular critic on my work-I hope that would be okay :). And maybe some day (and I hope for this day to come badly) when I'd have my works published-I'd thank you for making me reach there.

You people really are the kind of critics that writers dream about. <3
Hauos Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
It is a very sweet gesture, and we appreciate the sentiment. But we want to help all the little know writers out there that need betterment. My suggestion is that you branch out to your fellow writers here on DA. You are not the only one who wants regular feedback. Help out the other writers, and you'd be amazed at what you, yourself, will learn.
LoveHealsYou725 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
That's understandable, and you make a lot of sense. Thank you for the great suggestion-I never thought of it that way. Thank you! :hug:
LoveHealsYou725 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
I said this before, but I am going to say it again-thank you for the critique, means the world that someone could take the time out to help me see where I need improvements, and my strong points. I can't thank you enough.

God bless.
Hauos Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
You're very, very welcome. It's people like you who make critiquing a pleasure.
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